Live Virtual Group Session: 12PM EDT September 29th 2021

Thank you to everyone who joined for this session!

For this session we close read “in lieu of a poem, i’d like to say” by Danez Smith, posted below.

Our prompt for this session was “Write about what begins at the end of your name.”

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“in lieu of a poem, i’d like to say” by Danez Smith

apricots & brown teeth in browner mouths nashing dates & a clementine’s underflesh under yellow nail & dates like auntie heads & the first time someone dried mango there was god & grandma’s Sunday only song & how the plums are better as plums dammit & i was wrong & a June’s worth of moons & the kiss stain of the berries & lord the prunes & the miracle of other people’s lives & none of my business & our hands sticky and a good empty & please please pass the bowl around again & the question of dried or ripe & the sex of grapes & too many dates & us us us us us & varied are the feast but so same the sound of love gorged & the women in the Y hijab a lily in the water & all of us who come from people who signed with x’s & yesterday made delicacy in the wrinkle of the fruit & at the end of my name begins the lot of us

7 thoughts on “Live Virtual Group Session: 12PM EDT September 29th 2021

  1. Patricia D.

    At the end of your name…

    Once there are no more Dobkins, centuries of a gene pool will end.
    Hazel eyes, short stature, inquisitive minds may linger among the stars where souls may peer down from the heavens waiting to inhabit a new born body.
    Would the world miss us Dobkins?
    I’d like to think that it would as we as a clan have devoted ourselves to others’ enrichment.

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    • al3793

      Patricia, I expect close readers among those souls that peer down from the heavens waiting to inhabit a new born body. Beautiful language and such motion, the line made me want to move and prompted a deep breath to inhale and hold that line. The planets have put on quite a show in these late summer nights, the dark sky a harbor for the souls you write about. Andre

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  2. al3793

    What begins at the end of my name

    is a long story
    that began with lots of nurture &
    lots of instruction and love &
    lots of direction in a safe space &
    lots of time outside, in the woods & hitting baseballs any chance I could, & school &
    a gradual exposure to the things of the world that I remained so inexperienced about for a long time &
    an excursion into the world of a medic that opened this life to experience – I had no choice &
    now a wild man’s journey of a wise old fool.

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    • michele348

      The journey of life, a series of ascending steps in a spiral staircase. When reaching the top, we are not “fools” but wise travelers having had the experiences that our journey has supplied us.

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  3. Write about what begins at the end of my name~~~

    My name is just a brief snapshot of my entirety.
    The end of my name should have a question mark following it.
    I’m forever questioning everything about me.
    Who am I? Why am I here? What about that “road not taken”?
    Is there something out there waiting for me to discover it?
    The profoundness in the simplicity of life… simply amazing.

    The more I learn, the more questions I have.
    Maybe some questions have no answers and that’s okay.
    Maybe what’s important is the searching,
    sparking synapses in this overworked brain of mine.

    Neverending, self-exploring, emerging pathways.
    What’s around the bend?
    Don’t know, but I intend to find out.

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