Live Virtual Group Session: 12PM EDT September 20th 2024

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For this session we read a poem “Stripping and Putting On” by May Swenson, posted below.

Our prompt was: “Write about putting on light, like clothes.”

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Stripping and Putting On by May Swenson

I always felt like a bird blown through the world.
I never felt like a tree.

I never wanted a patch of this earth to stand in,
that would stick to me.

I wanted to move by whatever throb my muscles
sent to me.

I never cared for cars, that crawled on land or
air or sea.

If I rode, I'd rather another animal: horse, camel,
or shrewd donkey.

Never needed a nest, unless for the night, or when
winter overtook me.

Never wanted an extra skin between mine and the sun,
for vanity or modesty.

Would rather not have parents, had no yen for a child,
and never felt brotherly.

But I'd borrow or lend love of friend. Let friend be
not stronger or weaker than me.

Never hankered for Heaven, or shield from a Hell,
or played with the puppets Devil and Deity.

I never felt proud as one of the crowd under
the flag of a country.

Or felt that my genes were worth more or less than beans,
by accident of ancestry.

Never wished to buy or sell. I would just as well
not touch money.

Never wanted to own a thing that wasn't I born with.
Or to act by a fact not discovered by me.

I always felt like a bird blown through the world.
But I would like to lay

the egg of a world in a nest of calm beyond
this world's storm and decay.

I would like to own such wings as light speeds on,
far from this globule of night and day.

I would like to be able to put on, like clothes,
the bodies of all those

creatures and things hatched under the wings
of that world.

"Stripping and Putting On" by May Swenson, from Nature: Poems Old and New. © Houghton Mifflin Company, 2000. Reprinted with permission.

6 thoughts on “Live Virtual Group Session: 12PM EDT September 20th 2024

  1. anneampyevans's avatar anneampyevans

    Putting on Light Like Clothes

    I wear the light of this time

    such a heavy jacket, weighing down

    throat, shoulders, and chest.

    I hear an urging to remove the layers,

    breathe freely, allow

    what’s in the harsh spotlight

    to slip off, let my bare intention

    for peace be what warms me.

    The darkness of it all submits

    to the simple flame of

    this moment, right here, right now.

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  2. Pam's avatar Pam

    Write about putting on light, like clothes

    “She lights up the room” – I think of Ingrid Bergman, Clarissa Dalloway, women wearing a light, bringing a light, a vitality, a kindness. A female light, connected somehow to connection, compassion, understanding, a quiet joy in the ability to help. So different from the white knight on a brightly colored horse, always with a sword, to save the day from darkness. Women’s softer light – always threatened with being blown out. Women too often told to reflect and reproduce men’s glory, not their own. In Afghanistan, women’s voices now silenced, and clothing obliterates individuality. A living shroud. Is that life? Where is the light? In America, childless cat ladies make no apologies – for now.

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  3. Elizabeth's avatar Elizabeth

    I wear the light

    When I need to feel bright,

    when I need to feel might,

    when I’m ready to fight.

    I wear the dark and the gray

    when I want to run away,

    when I don’t want to stay,

    When I want the end of the day.

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  4. michele348's avatar michele348

    About putting on light, like clothes~~~

    I walk about this earthtrying to find my place,not quite fitting in aworld where darknessseems to overshadowthe light.

    Stresses imposed by anger and hatewear on melike a woolen coaton a sultry summer day.

    My lifeblood pours forth.Hope, that lies within my fragile heart,is injured by the arrows of discontentthat fly freely through the air.

    There is no meaningful discourse,only finger-pointing anddegradation.True freedom seems to be allottedfor the chosen few.

    Where can I goto find the lightthat will wrap mein peace and tranquilityas the distant callof the mourning dovelulls me to sleep at night?

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  5. michele348's avatar michele348

    About putting on a light, like clothes

    I walk about this earth
    trying to find my place,
    not quite fitting in a
    world where darkness
    seems to overshadow
    the light.

    Stresses imposed by anger and hate
    wear on me
    like a woolen coat
    on a sultry summer day.

    My lifeblood pours forth.
    Hope, that lies within my fragile heart,
    is injured by the arrows of discontent
    that fly freely through the air.

    There is no meaningful discourse,
    only finger-pointing and
    degradation.
    True freedom seems to be allotted
    for the chosen few.

    Where can I go
    to find the light
    that will wrap me
    in peace and tranquility
    as the distant call
    of the mourning dove
    lulls me to sleep at night?

    Like

  6. Jennie Lee's avatar Jennie Lee

    To be good is to see the dark inside of you like it is some shivering blessing from a world out of reach.

    One in which the word survivor is stitched to your lips, scarred to my fingertips and my name is filial piety everywhere but inside our home.

    Switch it

    on and off.

    We are dressed to the nines in clothes warped

    not by babies in sweatshops or the dim in their eyes as they prick

    their fingers but the yellow of the sun. 

    Except we are not allowed in the sun. We are not allowed sugar or spice or popcorn or grease or Styrofoam cups. Flap the fabric in their faces like wings we have forgotten how to use.

    When we go out to the restaurant of befores you refuse to order anything because you believe the seed inside you is still growing. That it is craving the light from the clothes you hold to your chest like you need them to breathe.  

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