Live Virtual Group Session: 12PM EST December 8th 2023

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For this session we read a poem “The Mountains” by D’Arcy McNickle, posted below.

Our prompt was: Write about what is seen in the half-night.

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"The Mountains" by D'Arcy McNickle

There is snow, now—
A thing of silent creeping—
And day is strange half-night . . .
And the mountains have gone, softly murmuring something . . .

And I remember pale days,
Pale as the half-night . . . and as strange and sad.

I remember times in this room
When but to glance thru an opened window
Was to be filled with an ageless crying wonder:
The grand slope of the meadows,
The green rising of the hills,
And then far-away slumbering mountains—
Dark, fearful, old—
Older than old, rusted, crumbling rock,
Those mountains . . .
But sometimes came a strange thing
And theirs was the youth of a cloudlet flying,
Sunwise, flashing . . .

And such is the wisdom of the mountains!
Knowing it nothing to be old,
And nothing to be young!

There is snow, now—
A silent creeping . . .

And I have walked into the mountains,
Into canyons that gave back my laughter,
And the lover-girl’s laughter . . .
And at dark,
When our skin twinged to the night-wind,
Built us a great marvelous fire
And sat in quiet,
Carefully sipping at scorching coffee . . .

But when a coyote gave to the night
A wail of all the bleeding sorrow,
All the dismal, grey-eyed pain
That those slumbering mountains had ever known—
Crept close to each other
And close to the fire—
Listening—
Then hastily doused the fire
And fled (giving many excuses)
With tightly-clasping hands.

Snow, snow, snow—
A thing of silent creeping

And once,
On a night of screaming chill,
I went to climb a mountain’s cold, cold body
With a boy whose eyes had the ancient look of the mountains,
And whose heart the swinging dance of a laughter-child . . .
Our thighs ached
And lungs were fired with frost and heaving breath—
The long, long slope—
A wind mad and raging . . .
Then—the top!

There should have been . . . something . . .
But there was silence, only—
Quiet after the wind’s frenzy,
Quiet after all frenzy—
And more mountains,
Endlessly into the night . . .

And such is the wisdom of mountains!
Knowing how great is silence,
How nothing is greater than silence!

And so they are gone, now,
And they murmured something as they went—
Something in the strange half-night . . .

Credit: D’Arcy McNickle. poets.org

20 thoughts on “Live Virtual Group Session: 12PM EST December 8th 2023

  1. Trisha Lawson's avatar Trisha Lawson

    The last time I saw you was in the half-night; a day so dark it felt like night. The grey-sky pain knowing that it would be the last time, knowing before me that it would be. I remember the time spent suspended in hammocks under redwood trees and thick, intricate spider webs stretching between the spaces – fragile, delicate, and eager to join. The laughter, the love, and the connection of those brief, all too brief days, in the mountains. I can go there again, but it won’t be the same without you, but neither am I the same.

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    • michele348's avatar michele348

      Trisha, your writing pulls at the heartstrings…the knowing that someone or something you love so dearly will soon be gone and for that, you will never be the same.

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    • al3793's avatar al3793

      Trisha,
      I see the delicateness of connection to another in the web of the spider, and the way time suspends like a hammock under giant redwood trees. Also the sound of your narrative as you read it took me back into the poem and its sound and rhythm. Andre

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  2. rehavia6's avatar rehavia6

    Write About What is Seen in the Half-Night

    In the half night trees and buildings blend together.
    Boundaries disappear
    Street lights come on.
    My work persona falls away and I return to myself.

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  3. michele348's avatar michele348

    About what is seen in the half-night~~~

    In the darkness between night and day, a flood of thoughts passes over me.
    Thoughts that compete in my mind for possession of my heart.

    I think about my responsibilities to my loved ones and to myself.
    I think about the world and how it’s so torn apart.
    I think about the innocent children who have lost their families.
    I think about my grandchildren and the world they will inherit.

    I force my eyes open to catch the first rays of sunlight moving over the nearby hills.
    My thoughts diffuse and I set about not merely to think, but to act.

    Maybe, just maybe, I can make a positive change somewhere, somehow.

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    • al3793's avatar al3793

      Michele,
      Competition within ones mind for possession of the heart took me to Psalm 63:

      6 On my bed I remember you;
      I think of you through the watches of the night.
      7 Because you are my help,
      I sing in the shadow of your wings.
      8 I cling to you;
      your right hand upholds me.

      Your speaker’s mind insists on action although the eyes may want to stay closed. .

      Andre

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    • Elizabeth's avatar Elizabeth

      Michele, you described the strife in the world and yet you try not just to think about what to do, but also how to act. Action is movement towards something. You make me think about action gives us agency. May we all be blessed to have the strength to act when we need to.

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  4. al3793's avatar al3793

    Write about the half night…

    What does one do when the night ends before it is over?
    Turn to the wisdom of the ancient grey eyed mountains
    that have stood witness to millennia
    of histories of those born to the land
    and of passersby and explorers seeking a rush from altitude’s hypoxia
    or perhaps the edge of a continent.
    Wending one’s way through a high mountain meadow
    as spring emerges at the foot of one of these behemoths
    one can almost hear the shoots of wildflowers
    break through the crust of only recently thawed earth.
    And one can be certain that anything overheard is confidential,
    not a word to anyone,
    conversations, arguments, conspiracies, and philosophies hatched
    were safe in this space.
    Lovers could find a secluded sacred spot to share the fire of their passions unfettered, unjudged, untold.
    How can one not go to these ancient, greying mountains
    rugged, tough, still standing firm despite the erosion of eons,
    enduring the seemingly insuperable silences,
    watching the snow creep without sound from the highest ridges toward the valley below, unheard,
    standing sentry day after day and season in and season out,
    without ever saying a word, waiting for the next embrace?

    afl 12.8.2023

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    • michele348's avatar michele348

      I’m waiting for chapter 2! Such wonderful, descriptive phrasing allows the reader to become part of the setting, although I don’t know if I could handle those steep mountain trails!

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  5. rehavia6's avatar rehavia6

    Andre, the mountains were here long before we were and will remain long after we are gone They have witnessed so much are stand steadfast.

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  6. Elizabeth's avatar Elizabeth

    What is seen in the half-night
    Can depend on what was seen in the light of day
    The half night opens us up to process
    All the comings and goings
    The micro and the macro
    Our small world and the larger global entity

    And rather than merely seeing
    We are allowed to experience all the feelings
    The range of emotions
    That make us human beings
    It’s both a gift and a burden
    What is seen in the half-night

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    • michele348's avatar michele348

      I agree, Elizabeth, that what we experience in the half-night can, indeed, be both a burden and a blessing. Sometimes in the glare of daylight, reality sets and our paths forward may tend to become blurred by the reality of life. But we give it our best effort.

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