Live Virtual Group Session: 12PM EDT July 28th 2023

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For this session we read a poem Ode to a Large Tuna in the Market” by Pablo Neruda translated by Robin Robertson, posted below.

Our prompt was: Write about standing out in a crowd.

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 "Ode to a Large Tuna in the Market" by Pablo Neruda translated by Robin Robertson

Here,   
among the market vegetables,
this torpedo
from the ocean   
depths,   
a missile   
that swam,
now   
lying in front of me
dead.

Surrounded
by the earth's green froth   
—these lettuces,
bunches of carrots—
only you   
lived through
the sea's truth, survived
the unknown, the
unfathomable
darkness, the depths   
of the sea,
the great   
abyss,
le grand abîme,
only you:   
varnished
black-pitched   
witness
to that deepest night.

Only you:
dark bullet
barreled   
from the depths,
carrying   
only   
your   
one wound,
but resurgent,
always renewed,
locked into the current,
fins fletched
like wings
in the torrent,
in the coursing
of
the
underwater
dark,
like a grieving arrow,
sea-javelin, a nerveless   
oiled harpoon.

Dead
in front of me,
catafalqued king
of my own ocean;
once   
sappy as a sprung fir
in the green turmoil,
once seed
to sea-quake,
tidal wave, now
simply
dead remains;
in the whole market
yours   
was the only shape left
with purpose or direction
in this   
jumbled ruin
of nature;
you are   
a solitary man of war
among these frail vegetables,
your flanks and prow
black   
and slippery
as if you were still
a well-oiled ship of the wind,
the only
true
machine
of the sea: unflawed,
undefiled,   
navigating now
the waters of death.

Source: Poetry (April 2007)

7 thoughts on “Live Virtual Group Session: 12PM EDT July 28th 2023

  1. Michele348's avatar Michele348

    About standing out in a crowd~~~

    I am here. Do you see me?
    I am one of the billions who walk the face of this world,
    this rolling ship of life.
    I am minute in the grand scheme of things,
    a minuscule piece of flesh and thought making its journey through life.

    But I am significant,
    I was formed by the Creator for a purpose, for a role to serve the other travelers on this life journey.
    He made me to “stand out”, to peer above the confusion of the world and maneuver through its obstacles.

    Moving quietly, moving unobtrusively through this maze of life… ready for the challenge.

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    • Andre Lijoi's avatar Andre Lijoi

      Michele,
      The capacity for thought that the miniscule piece of flesh possesses, that comes from the soul, enables the human to actualize the purpose for which the being is created.

      Andre

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  2. al3793's avatar al3793

    Standing Out in a Crowd

    The general aims his revolver at the prisoner’s head.
    The prisoner, in the moment between the sound of the powder’s explosion
    and the time the bullet pierced his scalp, hunched his shoulders and grimaced,
    tilting his head away from the lethal projectile torpedoing for his brain.

    Instinct.

    A summary execution in the streets of Saigon, Tet raging all around.
    “If you hesitate, if don’t do your duty, your men won’t follow you.”
    One must wonder how many combatants died on that street in that moment.

    How much of a man’s life passes before his eyes in that split second from life to death?
    The truth will likely never be known.

    The poet says,
    “I would rather die than explain to the blue horses
    what war is.
    They would either faint in horror, or simply
    find it impossible to believe.”

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    • michele348's avatar michele348

      What passes through the mind in the split seconds before death: fear, anger, regret, hatred,sadness or simply acceptance? As you said, we will never know unless we meet again in the other realm.
      Your words bring to the reader vivid sounds and sights of a troubling time in history. It is worrisome that we have not learned these difficult lessons yet.

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  3. rehavia6's avatar rehavia6

    Standing Out in a Crowd

    March to the beat of your own drum
    Sing out loud to the music of your soul
    Do not be afraid to vehemently adhere to your unpopular views
    Be yourself
    Wear the brightest of colors
    Avoid the latest fads

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  4. Andre Lijoi's avatar Andre Lijoi

    I love the line, “Do not be afraid to vehemently adhere to your unpopular views,” and, “wear the brightest colors.” I think the capacity for candor brings out our brightest colors, and probably our best. Andre

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