Live Virtual Group Session: 6pm EDT August 31st 2020

Twenty people from Canada, England, Greece, ME, PA, MI, NY, WA, and RI chatted in their geography and, with their presence, showed an interest in puzzling together possible meanings in Lucille Cliftonโ€™s โ€blessing the boats.โ€ This poem, written entirely in small cap and sans punctuation, furnished a gentle feeling for many participants, who heard โ€œa prayer for these times,โ€ โ€œan Irish prayer with โ€˜the wind at your back,โ€โ€™ a blessing, a sendoff to another place, perhaps even to a time and place beyond death. We selected this poem mindful of the transition of going into September, into the fall, and โ€“ for many โ€“ into the school year. In the shadow of the poem, each of us identified a transition in our own lives, envisioning ourselves collectively โ€œin our boatsโ€. As someone observed: โ€œwe are now beyond our initial understanding of what COVID is all aboutโ€, getting โ€œglimpses or brightnessโ€ and yet still navigating the unknown. The word โ€œmayโ€ (appearing four times in the body of poem) suggests uncertainty, possibility, permission and, in that way, allows readers a freedom to sail the poem at their own pace and understand as they will. For some, the poem exuded โ€œgentle simplicityโ€. One person offered that water in literature suggests baptism and beginnings.

Many highlighted the physicality embedded in the text. The word โ€œlipโ€ (the lip of our understanding), was a stumbling block, a โ€œhaltingโ€ for some and, for others, an evocation of an edge, a cusp, a beginning. The โ€œbackโ€ makes us think of a โ€œconcrete bodyโ€. One person mentioned that she had expected to read the reciprocal โ€œlove you backโ€ but remembered to read closely (narrativeโ€™s MO) and read that the โ€œyouโ€ (addressed in the poem) could turn from the wind and expect the wind to โ€œlove your back.โ€ Oh, the many discoveries we make when we close read! Another participant expressed their experience of physical sensuousness that included feeling hands laid on the back of passenger(s) embarking from a place as nebulous as โ€œthisโ€ to an unnamed โ€œthat.โ€  The word โ€œinnocenceโ€ called to many, who paired the word with ideas of trust, energy, and the protection of not knowing.  

One participant remembered spending time, as an aspirant to medical practice, at St. Maryโ€™s, the geography pointed to by the poet Lucille Clifton, steering a craft on the โ€œlipโ€ of waves in Chesapeake Bay. Like others he brought into the discussion the trust needed to turn oneโ€™s back on the wind and allow/expect the wind to love your back.

The prompt โ€œWrite about turning from the face of fearโ€ brought creative writing that described snorkeling in the Pacific Ocean; feeling fear (โ€œcold, pressing โ€œ) by night and day and respite from this fear that prayer brings; choice/options depicted by Door 1 and Door 2; and references to current events and the promulgation of a fear-based culture. Together, we reflected on how fear takes on different forms, including based on the stories we tell ourselves and others. ย  As we adjourned (knowing we will have a holiday hiatus on September 7 and be together again on September 14), participants chatted words and phrases expressing what they were taking with them this evening: beauty, bravery, gentle transition, hope, letting my back be loved, stillness, surfing gently, and trust. Thank you for sailing with us, and see you soon!

Participants are warmly encouraged to share what you wrote below (โ€œLeave a Replyโ€), to keep the conversation going here, bearing in mind that the blog of course is a public space where confidentiality is not assured.

Also, we would love to learn more about your experience of these sessions, so if youโ€™re able, please take the time to fill out a follow-up survey of one to two quick questions!

Please join us for our next session Wednesday, September 2nd at 12pm EDT, with more times listed on our Live Virtual Group Sessions page.


blessing the boats
BY LUCILLE CLIFTON

                                    (at St. Mary's)

may the tide
that is entering even now
the lip of our understanding
carry you out
beyond the face of fear
may you kiss
the wind then turn from it
certain that it will
love your back     may you
open your eyes to water
water waving forever
and may you in your innocence
sail through this to that


Lucille Clifton, "blessing the boats" 
from Blessing the Boats: New and Selected Poems 1988-2000. 
Copyright ยฉ 2000 by Lucille Clifton.

Encuentros virtuales en vivo: sรกbado 29 agosto, 14:00 EST

Tuvimos la รบltima sesiรณn en espaรฑol del mes y nos fue muy bien. Asistieron 13 participantes en total representando a Chile, Estados Unidos, Espaรฑa, Brasil y Argentina. Como viene siendo habitual, tuvimos una buena combinaciรณn de โ€œveteranos y noveles.โ€

La obra que elegimos para esta sesiรณn fue un poema del chileno Pablo Neruda, llamado โ€œMuere lentamente,โ€ publicado a continuaciรณn. Dos voluntarias leyeron el texto en voz alta. Desde el principio, hubo gente que se mostrรณ incรณmoda con el texto, puesto que habla de la muerte, y ademรกs algunos lo leyeron como una admoniciรณn, como una suerte de โ€œreprimendaโ€ a los que no hacen lo que dice el texto que hay que hacer โ€œpara no morirโ€ (se verรญa mรกs como una orden en vez de una sugerencia). Otra participante seรฑalรณ explรญcitamente una idea con la que todos se identificaron en estos tiempos de pandemia: convertirse en esclavos del hรกbito, haciendo todos los dรญas lo mismo. Conceptos como estos llevaban a darle una interpretaciรณn โ€œoscuraโ€ al texto, como que el lector estuviera obligado a cambiar si es que no hacรญa algo de lo que decรญa el texto. Sin embargo, otra participante no lo entendiรณ como algo impositivo, sino como una metรกfora, donde acciones como leer, escuchar mรบsica, eran equivalentes a otras como tejer, nadar, o practicar algรบn deporte; serรญan como consejos de alguien querido para poder disfrutar mejor de la vida. A otra participante le llamรณ mucho la atenciรณn lo โ€œlentoโ€ del morirโ€ฆ en contraposiciรณn a lo rรกpido del vivir? Es morir lentamente una agonรญa? Puso de relieve y generรณ un intercambio acerca de lo subjetivo del tiempo.

Asimismo, fue interesante el detalle que pesquisรณ otra participante de lo impersonal de casi todos los versos, excepto los รบltimos, donde se ve un tono mucho mรกs imperativo, y dirigido al lector. Algo que sobrevolรณ toda la conversaciรณn fue la sensaciรณn de que el poema no era โ€œnerudiano,โ€ no parecรญa un texto propio del poeta, sino escrito por otra persona, lo que generรณ cierta controversia. Finalmente, algo sobre lo que todos los participantes estuvieron de acuerdo fue en que no existe una sola receta para ser feliz.

Escribir en conjunto: โ€œEscribe acerca de un momento en que te sintieras vivo.โ€ Varios participantes compartieron sus momentos, algunos โ€œa la sombra del texto original,โ€ y otros โ€œdesmarcรกndoseโ€ del texto, en formas muy creativas, lo que generรณ un rico intercambio entre los participantes. Sin embargo, a pesar de esta mezcla de resultados, todos fueron explรญcitos en demostrar la vida que recorrรญa sus venas, ya fuera expresando, casi exclamando, lo viva que se sentรญa la autora, en otro aporte, una participante puso en contraposiciรณn los conceptos de vida y muerte, y lo necesario que son el uno para el otro (no se entenderรญan sin el otro). Otra participante puso de manifiesto el concepto de โ€œvida en parรฉntesis,โ€ y por รบltimo, y como colofรณn a la sesiรณn, una participante afirmรณ en su escrito que โ€œse sentรญa tan viva que la muerte la aterraba,โ€ lo que generรณ multitud de comentarios.

Se alienta a los participantes a compartir lo que escribieron a continuaciรณn (“Deja una respuesta”), para mantener la conversaciรณn aquรญ, teniendo en cuenta que el blog, por supuesto, es un espacio pรบblico donde no se garantiza la confidencialidad.

Por favor, รบnase a nosotros para nuestra prรณxima sesiรณn en espaรฑol: Martes, 15 de septiembre a las 4:30 pm EDT, con mรกs oportunidades de sesiones en otros idiomas listadas en nuestra pรกgina de sesiones grupales virtuales en vivo.

ยกEsperamos verte pronto!

ยกCuรฉntenos mรกs sobre su experiencia en este taller completando esta breve encuesta!


Muere Lentamente (Pablo Neruda)

Muere lentamente quien no viaja,
quien no lee, quien no escucha mรบsica,
quien no halla encanto en si mismo.

Muere lentamente quien destruye su amor propio,
quien no se deja ayudar.

Muere lentamente quien se transforma en esclavo del habito,
repitiendo todos los dรญas los mismos senderos,
quien no cambia de rutina,
no se arriesga a vestir un nuevo color
o no conversa con desconocidos.

Muere lentamente quien evita una pasiรณn
Y su remolino de emociones,
Aquellas que rescatan el brillo en los ojos
y los corazones decaidos.

Muere lentamente quien no cambia de vida cuando estรก insatisfecho con su trabajo o su amor,
Quien no arriesga lo seguro por lo incierto
para ir detrรกs de un sueรฑo,
quien no se permite al menos una vez en la vida huir de los consejos sensatosโ€ฆ
ยกVive hoy! - ยกHaz hoy!
ยกAriesga hoy!ยกNo te dejes morir lentamente!
ยกNo te olvides de ser feliz!


ฮ–ฯ‰ฮฝฯ„ฮฑฮฝฮฎ ฯƒฯ…ฮฝฮตฮดฯฮฏฮฑ ฮฑฯ†ฮทฮณฮทฮผฮฑฯ„ฮนฮบฮฎฯ‚ ฮนฮฑฯ„ฯฮนฮบฮฎฯ‚: ฮ ฮญฮผฯ€ฯ„ฮท 27 ฮ‘ฯ…ฮณฮฟฯฯƒฯ„ฮฟฯ…, 6 m.m. EEST

ฮฃฮฑฯ‚ ฮตฯ…ฯ‡ฮฑฯฮนฯƒฯ„ฮฟฯฮผฮต ฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฯƒฯ…ฮผฮผฮตฯ„ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮฑฯ„ฮต ฯƒฮต ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฮฎฮฝ ฯ„ฮท ฯƒฯ…ฮฝฮตฮดฯฮฏฮฑ.

ฮคฮฟ ฮบฮตฮฏฮผฮตฮฝฯŒ ฮผฮฑฯ‚ ฮณฮนฮฑ ฯƒฮฎฮผฮตฯฮฑ ฮฎฯ„ฮฑฮฝ:ย ยซฮงฮฟฮนฯฮฟฮบฮฌฮผฮทฮปฮฟฯ‚ยป ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮˆฯฯƒฮทฯ‚ ฮฃฯ‰ฯ„ฮทฯฮฟฯ€ฮฟฯฮปฮฟฯ…

ฮ˜ฮญฮผฮฑ:ย ฮ“ฯฮฌฯˆฯ„ฮต ฮณฮนฮฑ ฮญฮฝฮฑ ฯ‡ฯŽฯฮฟ ฯ†ฯฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฏฮดฮฑฯ‚

ฮฃฯฮฝฯ„ฮฟฮผฮฑ ฮธฮฑ ฮผฮฟฮนฯฮฑฯƒฯ„ฮฟฯฮผฮต ฯ€ฮตฯฮนฯƒฯƒฯŒฯ„ฮตฯฮตฯ‚ ฯ€ฮปฮทฯฮฟฯ†ฮฟฯฮฏฮตฯ‚ ฯƒฯ‡ฮตฯ„ฮนฮบฮฌ ฮผฮต ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฮฎฮฝ ฯ„ฮท ฯƒฯ…ฮฝฮตฮดฯฮฏฮฑ, ฮณฮน โ€˜ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฯŒ ฮตฯ€ฮนฯƒฯ„ฯฮญฯˆฯ„ฮต ฮพฮฑฮฝฮฌ.

ฮฃฮฑฯ‚ ฯ€ฯฮฟฯƒฮบฮฑฮปฮฟฯฮผฮต ฮฝฮฑ ฮผฮฟฮนฯฮฑฯƒฯ„ฮตฮฏฯ„ฮต ฯ„ฮฑ ฮณฯฮฑฯ€ฯ„ฮฌ ฯƒฮฑฯ‚ ฮผฮฑฮถฮฏ ฮผฮฑฯ‚ ฯ€ฮฑฯฮฑฮบฮฌฯ„ฯ‰.

ฮšฮฑฮปฮฟฯฮผฮต ฯŒฮปฮตฯ‚ ฮบฮฑฮน ฯŒฮปฮฟฯ…ฯ‚ ฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฯƒฯ…ฮผฮผฮตฯ„ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮฑฯ„ฮต ฮฝฮฑ ฮผฮฟฮนฯฮฑฯƒฯ„ฮตฮฏฯ„ฮต ฯŒฯƒฮฑ ฮณฯฮฌฯˆฮฑฯ„ฮต ฮบฮฑฯ„ฮฌ ฯ„ฮท ฮดฮนฮฌฯฮบฮตฮนฮฑ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฯƒฯ…ฮฝฮตฮดฯฮฏฮฑฯ‚ ฮผฮฑฯ‚ ฯ€ฮฑฯฮฑฮบฮฌฯ„ฯ‰ (โ€œLeave a replyโ€) ฮบฮฑฮน ฮฝฮฑ ฮบฯฮฑฯ„ฮฎฯƒฮฟฯ…ฮผฮต ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฮฎ ฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฯ„ฯŒฯƒฮฟ ฮตฮฝฮดฮนฮฑฯ†ฮญฯฮฟฯ…ฯƒฮฑ ฯƒฯ…ฮถฮฎฯ„ฮทฯƒฮฎ ฮผฮฑฯ‚ ฮถฯ‰ฮฝฯ„ฮฑฮฝฮฎ, ฯ…ฯ€ฮตฮฝฮธฯ…ฮผฮฏฮถฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฌฯ‚ ฯƒฮฑฯ‚, ฮฒฮตฮฒฮฑฮฏฯ‰ฯ‚, ฯŒฯ„ฮน ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฮฎ ฮตฮฏฮฝฮฑฮน ฮผฮนฮฑ ฮดฮทฮผฯŒฯƒฮนฮฑ ฯ€ฮปฮฑฯ„ฯ†ฯŒฯฮผฮฑ ฮบฮฑฮน ฮท ฯ€ฯฯŒฯƒฮฒฮฑฯƒฮท ฮฑฮฝฮฟฮนฯ‡ฯ„ฮฎ ฯƒฯ„ฮฟ ฮบฮฟฮนฮฝฯŒ.

ฮ˜ฮฑ ฮธฮญฮปฮฑฮผฮต ฮฝฮฑ ฮผฮฌฮธฮฟฯ…ฮผฮต ฯ€ฮตฯฮนฯƒฯƒฯŒฯ„ฮตฯฮฑ  ฮณฮนฮฑ ฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฮตฮผฯ€ฮตฮนฯฮฏฮฑ ฯƒฮฑฯ‚ ฮผฮต ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฮญฯ‚ ฯ„ฮนฯ‚ ฯƒฯ…ฮฝฮตฮดฯฮฏฮตฯ‚. ฮ‘ฮฝ ฯ„ฮฟ ฮตฯ€ฮนฮธฯ…ฮผฮตฮฏฯ„ฮต, ฯ€ฮฑฯฮฑฮบฮฑฮปฮฟฯฮผฮต ฮฑฯ†ฮนฮตฯฯŽฯƒฯ„ฮต ฮปฮฏฮณฮฟ ฯ‡ฯฯŒฮฝฮฟ ฯƒฮต ฮผฮนฮฑ ฯƒฯฮฝฯ„ฮฟฮผฮท ฮญฯฮตฯ…ฮฝฮฑ ฮดฯฮฟ ฮตฯฯ‰ฯ„ฮฎฯƒฮตฯ‰ฮฝ!

ฮ‘ฮบฮฟฮปฮฟฯ…ฮธฮฎฯƒฯ„ฮต ฯ„ฮฟฮฝ ฯƒฯฮฝฮดฮตฯƒฮผฮฟ:ย https://tinyurl.com/nmedg-survey


ฮ‘ฯ€ฯŒฯƒฯ€ฮฑฯƒฮผฮฑ ฮฑฯ€ฯŒ ฯ„ฮฟ ฮดฮนฮฎฮณฮทฮผฮฑ ยซฮงฮฟฮนฯฮฟฮบฮฌฮผฮทฮปฮฟฯ‚ยป ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮˆฯฯƒฮทฯ‚ ฮฃฯ‰ฯ„ฮทฯฮฟฯ€ฮฟฯฮปฮฟฯ… (ฮงฮฟฮนฯฮฟฮบฮฌฮผฮทฮปฮฟฯ‚. ฮ‘ฮธฮฎฮฝฮฑ, ฮšฮญฮดฯฮฟฯ‚, 1992)

ฮ’ฮฑฯƒฮฏฮปฮตฯ…ฮต ฮฑฯ€ฯŒฮปฯ…ฯ„ฮท ฮทฯƒฯ…ฯ‡ฮฏฮฑ ฯƒฯ„ฮฟ ฮณฯฮฑฯ†ฮตฮฏฮฟ. ฮ‘ฯ…ฯ„ฯŒฯ‚ ฮฎฯ„ฮฑฮฝ ฮญฮฝฮฑฯ‚ ฮฑฯ€ฯŒ ฯ„ฮฟฯ…ฯ‚ ฮปฯŒฮณฮฟฯ…ฯ‚ ฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฮญฮบฮฑฮฝฮฑฮฝ ฯ„ฮนฯ‚ ฮตฯ€ฮนฯƒฮบฮญฯˆฮตฮนฯ‚ ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฮญฯ‚ ฯ„ฯŒฯƒฮฟ ฮตฯ…ฯ‡ฮฌฯฮนฯƒฯ„ฮตฯ‚. ฮŒฮปฮฑ ฮฎฯ„ฮฑฮฝ ฯ„ฮฑฮบฯ„ฮฟฯ€ฮฟฮนฮทฮผฮญฮฝฮฑ ฮบฮฑฮน ฮบฮฑฮธฮฑฯฮฌ ฮบฮฑฮน ฯ„ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฯŒฯ‡ฯฮฟฮฝฮฑ ฯ†ฯฮญฯƒฮบฮฑ, ฮฑฯ€ฮฟฯ€ฮฝฮญฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฑฯ‚ ฮผฮนฮฑ ฮฑฮฏฯƒฮธฮทฯƒฮท ฮดฯฮฟฯƒฮนฮฌฯ‚ ฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฮดฮตฮฝ ฮฎฯ„ฮฑฮฝ ฮตฯ†ฮฎฮผฮตฯฮท. ฮ‘ฮปฮปฮฌ ฮฎฯ„ฮฑฮฝ ฮบฯ…ฯฮฏฯ‰ฯ‚ ฮญฮฝฮฑ ฮผฮญฯฮฟฯ‚ ฮถฮตฯƒฯ„ฯŒ ฮบฮน ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฯŒ ฮฌฯฮตฯƒฮต ฯƒฯ„ฮท ฮฆฯฮญฮฝฯ„ฯ…. ฮŸ ฮตฮพฯ‰ฯ„ฮตฯฮนฮบฯŒฯ‚ ฮบฯŒฯƒฮผฮฟฯ‚ ฯƒฯ„ฮฑฮผฮฑฯ„ฮฟฯฯƒฮต ฯ€ฮฏฯƒฯ‰ ฮฑฯ€ฯŒ ฯ„ฮฟ ฯ‡ฮฑฮผฮทฮปฯŒ ฮบฮฏฯ„ฯฮนฮฝฮฟ ฯ€ฮฑฯฮฌฮธฯ…ฯฮฟ ฮผฮต ฯ„ฮฑ ฮบฮปฮตฮนฯƒฯ„ฮฌ ฯ€ฮฑฮฝฯ„ฮถฮฟฯฯฮนฮฑ ฮบฮฑฮน ฮฟ ฮฑฯƒฮธฮตฮฝฮฎฯ‚ ฮฒฮฟฯ…ฮปฮนฮฌฮถฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฑฯ‚ ฯƒฮต ฮผฮนฮฑ ฯ†ฮธฮฑฯฮผฮญฮฝฮท, ฮฒฮตฮปฮฟฯฮดฮนฮฝฮท ฯ€ฮฟฮปฯ…ฮธฯฮฟฮฝฮฏฯ„ฯƒฮฑ ฮฑฯ€ฮญฮฝฮฑฮฝฯ„ฮน ฯƒฯ„ฮฟ ฮณฮนฮฑฯ„ฯฯŒ, ฮผฯ€ฮฟฯฮฟฯฯƒฮต, ฯƒฮบฯฮฒฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฑฯ‚ ฮปฮฏฮณฮฟ ฯ„ฮฟ ฮบฮตฯ†ฮฌฮปฮน ฮบฮฑฮน ฮบฮฑฮผฯ€ฮฟฯ…ฯฮนฮฌฮถฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฑฯ‚ ฮฑฯฮนฯƒฯ„ฮตฯฮฌ, ฮฝฮฑ ฮดฮตฮน ฯŒฮปฮฟ ฯ„ฮฟ ฯƒฮบฮทฮฝฮนฮบฯŒ ฯ„ฮฟฯ… ฮนฮฑฯ„ฯฮตฮฏฮฟฯ… ฮฝฮฑ ฯƒฯ…ฮผฯ€ฯ…ฮบฮฝฯŽฮฝฮตฯ„ฮฑฮน ฯƒฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฮฑฮฝฯ„ฮฑฮฝฮฌฮบฮปฮฑฯƒฮท ฯ„ฮฟฯ… ฯ„ฮถฮฑฮผฮนฮฟฯ ฯŒฯ€ฯ‰ฯ‚ ฯƒฮต ฮผฮนฮฑ ฮผฮฑฮณฮนฮบฮฎ ฯƒฯ†ฮฑฮฏฯฮฑ. ฮˆฯ„ฯƒฮน ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฯƒฮบฯฯˆฮตฮน ฮบฮน ฮท ฮฆฯฮญฮฝฯ„ฯ… ฮตฮบฮตฮฏฮฝฮฟ ฯ„ฮฟ ฯ€ฯฯŽฯ„ฮฟ ฮฑฯ€ฯŒฮณฮตฯ…ฮผฮฑ ฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฯ€ฮฌฯ„ฮทฯƒฮต ฯ„ฮฟ ฯ€ฯŒฮดฮน ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮตฮดฯŽ ฮบฮฑฮน ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฮดฮตฮน ฯ„ฮฟ ฯƒฯŽฮผฮฑ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮฝฮฑ ฮผฮนฮบฯฮฑฮฏฮฝฮตฮน ฮบฮฑฮน ฯ„ฮฟ ฯ€ฯฯŒฯƒฯ‰ฯ€ฯŒ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮฝฮฑ ฮผฮตฮณฮตฮธฯฮฝฮตฯ„ฮฑฮน ฮบฮฑฯ„ฮฑฯ€ฮฏฮฝฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฑฯ‚ ฯŒฮปฮฟ ฯ„ฮฟ ฯƒฮบฮทฮฝฮนฮบฯŒ. ฮˆฮบฮธฮฑฮผฮฒฮท ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฮบฮฟฮนฯ„ฮฌฮพฮตฮน ฮผฮญฯƒฮฑ ฯƒฯ„ฮนฯ‚ ฮบฯŒฯฮตฯ‚ ฯ„ฯ‰ฮฝ ฮผฮฑฯ„ฮนฯŽฮฝ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฯŒฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฮฟ ฮผฮนฮบฯฯŒฮบฮฟฯƒฮผฮฟฯ‚ ฯ„ฮฟฯ… ฯ„ฮถฮฑฮผฮนฮฟฯ ฮญฯ€ฮฑฮนฯฮฝฮต ฮถฯ‰ฮฎ ฮบฮฑฮน ฮฑฯƒฯ„ฯฮฑฯ€ฮนฮฑฮฏฮฑ ฯ‡ฮฑฮฝฯŒฯ„ฮฑฮฝ.

ย ย ย ย ย ย  ฮคฮทฮฝ ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฯ†ฮญฯฮตฮน ฮผฮต ฯ„ฮฟ ฮถฯŒฯฮน ฮท ฮผฮทฯ„ฮญฯฮฑ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮบฮฑฮน ฯƒฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฮตฮพฯŽฯ€ฮฟฯฯ„ฮฑ ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮฑฮฝ ฮบฮฑฯ…ฮณฮฑฮดฮฏฯƒฮตฮน. ยซฮ“ฮนฮฑฯ„ฮฏ ฮธฮญฮปฮตฮนฯ‚ ฮฝฮฑ ฮผฮต ฯˆฮฑฯ‡ฮฟฯ…ฮปฮญฯˆฮตฮน ฮฌฮปฮปฮฟฯ‚ ฮญฮฝฮฑฯ‚ ฮณฮนฮฑฯ„ฯฯŒฯ‚;ยป ฯฯ‰ฯ„ฮฟฯฯƒฮต ฯ„ฯฮญฮผฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฑฯ‚ ฮท ฮฆฯฮญฮฝฯ„ฯ…. ฮงฯ‰ฯฮฏฯ‚ ฮฑฯ€ฮฌฮฝฯ„ฮทฯƒฮท ฮท ฮผฮทฯ„ฮญฯฮฑ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฯ€ฮฑฯ„ฮฎฯƒฮตฮน ฯ„ฮฟ ฮบฮฟฯ…ฮดฮฟฯฮฝฮน ฮบฮฑฮน ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮฑฮฝ ฯ€ฮตฯฮฌฯƒฮตฮน ฯƒฯ„ฮฟ ฯ†ฯ‰ฯ„ฮนฯƒฮผฮญฮฝฮฟ ฯ€ฯฮฟฮธฮฌฮปฮฑฮผฮฟ ฯ‡ฯ‰ฯฮฏฯ‚ ฮฝฮฑ ฮบฮฟฮนฯ„ฮฌฮถฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฑฮน.

ฮ•ฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฯ€ฮตฯฮฌฯƒฮตฮน ฮฑฯฮบฮตฯ„ฯŒฯ‚ ฮบฮฑฮนฯฯŒฯ‚ ฮฑฯ€ฯŒ ฯ„ฯŒฯ„ฮต. ฮคฯŽฯฮฑ ฮฎฯ„ฮฑฮฝ ฯ€ฮนฮฟ ฯ‡ฮปฯ‰ฮผฮฎ, ฯ„ฮฑ ฯ‡ฮญฯฮนฮฑ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮญฯ„ฯฮตฮผฮฑฮฝ ฯ€ฮตฯฮนฯƒฯƒฯŒฯ„ฮตฯฮฟ. ฮšฮฑฮน ฮฟ ฮณฮนฮฑฯ„ฯฯŒฯ‚ ฮฌฮปฮปฯ‰ฯƒฯ„ฮต ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฯ€ฮฑฯ‡ฯฮฝฮตฮน ฯ„ฮฟฯ…ฮปฮฌฯ‡ฮนฯƒฯ„ฮฟฮฝ ฮฟฮบฯ„ฯŽ ฮบฮนฮปฮฌ. ฮ ฮฑฯโ€™ ฯŒฮปฮฟ ฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฮตฮบฮตฮฏฮฝฮท ฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฯ€ฯฯŽฯ„ฮท ฯ†ฮฟฯฮฌ ฮฎฯ„ฮฑฮฝ ฮบฮฑฮปฮฟฮบฮฑฮฏฯฮน ฮบฮฑฮน ฮท ฮทฮผฮญฯฮฑ ฮบฯฮฑฯ„ฮฟฯฯƒฮต ฯ‰ฯ‚ ฯ„ฮนฯ‚ ฮตฮฝฮฝฮนฮฌ ฮฎ ฮตฮฝฮฝฮนฮฌฮผฮนฯƒฮน, ฮท ฮฆฯฮญฮฝฯ„ฯ… ฮผฯ€ฮฑฮฏฮฝฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฑฯ‚ ฯƒฯ„ฮฟ ฮณฯฮฑฯ†ฮตฮฏฮฟ ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฮตฮฝฯ„ฯฯ€ฯ‰ฯƒฮท ฯŒฯ„ฮน ฮตฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฮบฮนฯŒฮปฮฑฯ‚ ฮฝฯ…ฯ‡ฯ„ฯŽฯƒฮตฮน ฮบฮน ฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฯŒ ฮฑฯƒฯ…ฮฝฮฑฮฏฯƒฮธฮทฯ„ฮฑ ฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฮญฮบฮฑฮฝฮต ฮฝฮฑ ฯ‡ฮฑฮปฮฑฯฯŽฯƒฮตฮน. ฮ•ฮฏฯ‡ฮต ฮฑฯฯ‡ฮฏฯƒฮตฮน ฮฝฮฑ ฯƒฯ…ฮผฯ€ฮฑฮธฮตฮฏ ฯ„ฮฟ ฮนฮฑฯ„ฯฮตฮฏฮฟ ฮบฮฑฮน ฯ„ฮฟ ฮณฮนฮฑฯ„ฯฯŒ ฮบฮฑฮน ฯƒฯ„ฮฟ ฮตฮพฮฎฯ‚, ฯƒโ€™ ฯŒฮปฮฑ ฯ„ฮฑ ฯฮฑฮฝฯ„ฮตฮฒฮฟฯ ฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฮฑฮบฮฟฮปฮฟฯฮธฮทฯƒฮฑฮฝ, ฮบฮฌฮธฮต ฯ†ฮฟฯฮฌ ฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฮตฮบฮตฮฏฮฝฮฟฯ‚ ฮญฮบฮปฮตฮนฮฝฮต ฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฯ€ฯŒฯฯ„ฮฑ ฯ€ฮฏฯƒฯ‰ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮบฮฑฮน ฯ€ฮฎฮณฮฑฮนฮฝฮต ฮฝฮฑ ฯƒฯ„ฮฑฮธฮตฮฏ ฯŒฯฮธฮนฮฟฯ‚ ฮฑฯ€ฮญฮฝฮฑฮฝฯ„ฮฏ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฯ€ฮตฯฮนฮผฮญฮฝฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฌฯ‚ ฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฮฝฮฑ ฮบฮฑฮธฮฏฯƒฮตฮน, ฮผฮตฯƒฮฟฮปฮฑฮฒฮฟฯฯƒฮต ฮญฮฝฮฑ ฮบฮตฮฝฯŒ ฯ‡ฯฯŒฮฝฮฟฯ…, ฮปฮฏฮณฮฑ ฮดฮตฯ…ฯ„ฮตฯฯŒฮปฮตฯ€ฯ„ฮฑ ฮบฮฑฮธฯ…ฯƒฯ„ฮญฯฮทฯƒฮทฯ‚, ฮฏฯƒฯ‰ฯ‚ ฯ†ฮฑฮฝฯ„ฮฑฯƒฯ„ฮนฮบฮฎฯ‚, ฯ€ฮฟฯ… ฯƒฮฎฮผฮฑฮนฮฝฮฑฮฝ ฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฮญฮฝฮฑฯฮพฮท ฮผฮนฮฑฯ‚ ฮดฮนฮฑฮดฮนฮบฮฑฯƒฮฏฮฑฯ‚ ฮตฮพฮฑฮนฯฮตฯ„ฮนฮบฮฌ ฮตฯ…ฯ‡ฮฌฯฮนฯƒฯ„ฮทฯ‚. ฮ‘ฮผฮญฯƒฯ‰ฯ‚ ฮผฯŒฮปฮนฯ‚ ฮบฮฑฮธฯŒฯ„ฮฑฮฝ ฯƒฯ„ฮทฮฝ ฯ€ฮฟฮปฯ…ฮธฯฯŒฮฝฮฑ, ฮท ฮฆฯฮญฮฝฯ„ฯ… ฮญฯƒฮบฯ…ฮฒฮต ฮณฮญฯฮฝฮฟฮฝฯ„ฮฑฯ‚ ฯ„ฮฟฯ…ฯ‚ ฯŽฮผฮฟฯ…ฯ‚ ฮบฮฑฮน ฮบฮฟฮฏฯ„ฮฑฮถฮต ฯ„ฮฟฮฝ ฮตฮฑฯ…ฯ„ฯŒ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฯƒฯ„ฮฟ ฯ„ฮถฮฌฮผฮน. ฮ‘ฯ…ฯ„ฯŒ ฮฎฯ„ฮฑฮฝ ฯ„ฮฟ ฮดฮตฯฯ„ฮตฯฮฟ ฯƒฮฎฮผฮฑ. ฮ•ฮฝ ฯ„ฯ‰ ฮผฮตฯ„ฮฑฮพฯ ฮฟ ฮณฮนฮฑฯ„ฯฯŒฯ‚ ฮผฮตฮปฮตฯ„ฮฟฯฯƒฮต ฯ„ฮฟ ฮฝฯ„ฮฟฯƒฮนฮญ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚. ฮˆฯ€ฮตฮนฯ„ฮฑ ฯƒฮฎฮบฯ‰ฮฝฮต ฮปฮฏฮณฮฟ ฯ„ฮฟ ฮบฮตฯ†ฮฌฮปฮน, ฮญฯƒฯ„ฯฮตฯ†ฮต ฯ„ฮฟ ฮฒฮปฮญฮผฮผฮฑ ฯ„ฮฟฯ… ฯ€ฮฌฮฝฯ‰ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮบฮน ฮฌฯฯ‡ฮนฮถฮต ฮฝฮฑ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฮผฮนฮปฮฌฮตฮน. ฮˆฯ„ฯƒฮน ฮฌฯฯ‡ฮนฮถฮตย  ฮบฮฑฮฝฮฟฮฝฮนฮบฮฌ ฮท ฮตฯ€ฮฏฯƒฮบฮตฯˆฮท. ฮŒฮผฯ‰ฯ‚ ฯ„ฮฟ ฮณฮตฮณฮฟฮฝฯŒฯ‚ ฯŒฯ„ฮน ฮญฮผฮตฮฝฮต ฯ€ฮฌฮฝฯ„ฮฑ ฯƒฮนฯ‰ฯ€ฮทฮปฯŒฯ‚ ฯŒฯƒฮท ฯŽฯฮฑ ฮตฮบฮตฮฏฮฝฮท ฯ‡ฮฑฮนฯฮตฯ„ฮฟฯฯƒฮต ฯ„ฮฟ ฮตฮฏฮดฯ‰ฮปฯŒ ฯ„ฮทฯ‚ ฯƒฯ„ฮฟ ฯ„ฮถฮฌฮผฮน, ฮตฯ€ฮนฮฒฮตฮฒฮฑฮฏฯ‰ฮฝฮตย  ฯ„ฮท ฯƒฯ…ฮฝฮตฮฝฮฟฯ‡ฮฎ ฯ„ฮฟฯ… ฯƒโ€™ ฮญฮฝฮฑ ฮดฮนฮบฯŒ ฯ„ฮฟฯ…ฯ‚ ฮผฯ…ฯƒฯ„ฮนฮบฯŒ ฮบฯŽฮดฮนฮบฮฑ.


Live Virtual Group Session: 12pm EDT August 26th 2020

21 people attended todayโ€™s session, from Turkey, London, Pennsylvania, New York, California and other locales. After reading โ€œPlum,โ€ the excerpt from the novel โ€œHow Much of These Hills is Goldโ€ by C Pam Zhang, we considered these opening questions, โ€œWho do we see, who do we hear operating in this piece?โ€ The discussion initially centered around beings and relationships: the narrator (age unknown), the mother and child (โ€œFive, full of destructionโ€), another relative, some important pork, and a dead snake that captured everyoneโ€™s attention.

Participants noted how the childโ€™s (Lucy) spirit and enthusiasm fills a home space already brimming with humidity, odors, textures and other sensations that made us wonder not only where home is, but what home is — the text seemed to reframe our very notion of home as we entered the charactersโ€™ kitchen to learn about how maternal rules govern the snakeโ€™s final home.

The title of the excerpt, โ€œPlum,โ€ inspired dialogue around the juicy fruit with edible skin, desirable and possibly symbolic of other biblical connections to a garden of temptation, a snake, and flooding. As the author referenced unfurling as a revelation, our layered discussion too led us to a paradoxical place, where one participant asserted that โ€œMaโ€™s rules havenโ€™t bound this child; they encourage liberty.โ€ And as one participant described the snake as an ouroboros circling back onto itself eternally, our conversation returned to the snake and its meaning/associations:  a symbol of healing? Caduceus? A mysterious death? What is its future purpose?

The prompt โ€œWrite about the one who makes the rules” elicited a range of rule-making subjects from oneself, to family members, to the spirit. One respondent felt that making choices along theirย  life path requires ย a conversation between a gentler kinder inner being and a โ€œvoice in the heavens.โ€ย  Each human beingย  is multidimensional in listening to and following rules. Another wrote โ€œrules are meant to be brokenโ€ yet confessed to being reluctant to break rules, to cause trouble, to get caught. The same writer proposed, โ€œI admire those who break the rules for a โ€˜greater right.โ€™โ€ A listener responded, โ€œI am a rule breaker, and I encourage you to be one.โ€ย  Sometimes, wrote another participant, the spirit sets the rules and takes us on a wild ride.ย  Still another wrote in a rebellious spirit about a brotherโ€™s rule for his teenaged sister: girls donโ€™t call boys.ย  Another writer observed what happens when a child is allowed to make the rules.ย  First there is hesitancy, then unbridled freedom, then some reactionary rule setting, โ€œworlds within worlds,โ€ and finally a โ€œshrieking as they are visible and naked.โ€ย 

Participants are warmly encouraged to share what you wrote below (โ€œLeave a Replyโ€), to keep the conversation going here, bearing in mind that the blog of course is a public space where confidentiality is not assured.

Also, we would love to learn more about your experience of these sessions, so if youโ€™re able, please take the time to fill out a follow-up survey of one to two quick questions!

Please join us for our next session Monday, August 31st at 6pm EDT, with more times listed on our Live Virtual Group Sessions page.


Plum

          It was Ma who laid down rules for burying the dead.

            Lucyโ€™s first dead thing was a snake. Five and full of destruction, she stomped puddles just to see the world flood. She leapt, landed. When the waves quit their crashing she stood in a ditch emptied of water. Coiled at its bottom, a drowned black snake.

            The ground steamed pungent wet. The buds on the trees were splitting, showing their paler insides. Lucy ran home with scales between her palms, aware that the world unfurled its hidden side.

            Ma smiled to see her. Kept smiling as Lucy opened her hands.

            Later, too late, Lucy would think on how another mother might have screamed, scolded, lied. How Ba, if Ba were there, might have said the snake was sleeping, and spun a tale to chase the hush of death right out the window.

            Ma only hefted her pan of pork and tied her apron tighter. Said, Lucy girl, burial zhi shi another recipe.

            Lucy prepared the snake alongside the meat.

            First rule, silver. To weigh down the spirit, Ma said as she peeled a caul of fat from the pork. She sent Lucy to her trunk. Beneath the heavy lid and its peculiar smell, between layers of fabric and dried herbs, Lucy found a silver thimble just large enough to fit over the snakeโ€™s head.

            Second, running water. To purify the spirit, Ma said as she washed the meat in a bucket. Her long fingers picked maggots free. Beside her, Lucy submerged the snakeโ€™s body.

            Third, a home. The most important rule of all, Ma said as her knife hacked through gristle. Silver and water could seal a spirit for a time, keep it from tarnish. But it was home that kept the spirit safe-settled. Home that kept it from wandering back, restless, returning time and again like some migrant bird. Lucy? Ma asked, knife paused. You know where?

            Lucyโ€™s faced warmed, as if Ma quizzed her on sums she hadnโ€™t studied. Home, Ma said again, and Lucy said it back, chewing her lip. Finally Ma cupped Lucyโ€™s face with a hand warm and slick and redolent of flesh.

            Fang xin, Ma Said. Told Lucy to loosen her heart. Itโ€™s not hard. A snake belongs in its burrow. You see? Ma told Lucy to leave the burying. Told her to run off and play.

From  How Much of These Hills is Gold by C Pam Zhang


Live Virtual Group Session: 6pm EDT August 24th 2020

On Monday August 24, 2020 twenty-eight people participated in slow-looking and then discussing two black and white photographs taken by Tina Modotti, who traveled with Edward Weston to Mexico in the 1920s and became involved with the cause of workers.

Participants from England, India, Mexico, and the Philippines joined those from CA, CT, ME, NY, NJ, NM, and PA in responding to the photos titled โ€œHands Resting on a Toolโ€ and โ€œHands Washingโ€: noticing the contrasts of dark and light, motion and stillness, the upright posture of one subject and the stooped or kneeling posture of another. People said they wanted to see the workersโ€™ faces, guessed age and gender, wondered if those who were pictured worked for themselves or others, and drew our attention to the hands of the photographer, which do not appear in the prints. Looking closely at the photographs and creating possible meanings, participants imagined strength and purpose in the workersโ€™ hand, and sympathy with the cause of workers on the part of the one documenting their labor. One person said the photos suggested sculpture, that these portraits of hands might be extended to include torsos and faces and formed into sculptures. Another person observed that the โ€œpinkyโ€ of the hands that were washing was missing a joint. Looking at those hands, one person recalled the axiom โ€œA womanโ€™s work is never doneโ€ and also said that there was no real rest because the โ€œrestingโ€ of hands on a tool was posed. One person remembered that the name Antwerp comes from a story involving hands and that colonial rulers sometimes punished those they colonized in Africa by severing their hands. This lead to discussing the many functions of hands and segued to the prompt: โ€œWrite about what hands can do.โ€

A handful of people read their 5-minutes of writing. These included narratives connecting hands to the mind or the heart, to the capacity to heal and hurt, and to prayerful intentions to โ€œdo only good.โ€ As participants responded to what was read they mentioned images evoked (such as tree branches); comparing and contrasting the capacities that hands hold; the language of hands; gracefulness and movement; a series of questions that narrowed and deepened thought; playfulness in a piece of fiction and the possibilities afforded by prosthetic limbs. One account detailed the procedure of home dialysisโ€”the procedure beginning with the sounds and rhythm of โ€œsnap and tapโ€ that felt like a dance and included the seriousness of purpose to โ€œremove deadly bubblesโ€ from the lines connecting person and machine.

Participants are warmly encouraged to share what you wrote below (โ€œLeave a Replyโ€), to keep the conversation going here, bearing in mind that the blog of course is a public space where confidentiality is not assured.

Also, we would love to learn more about your experience of these sessions, so if youโ€™re able, please take the time to fill out a follow-up survey of one to two quick questions!

Please join us for our next session Wednesday, August 26th at 12pm EDT, with more times listed on our Live Virtual Group Sessions page.


Tina Modotti, Hands Resting on Tool, 1927
From Tina Modotti and Edward Weston, The Mexico Years. 2004. London: Merill Publishers Ltd
Tina Modotti, Wands Washing, 1927
From Tina Modotti and Edward Weston, The Mexico Years. 2004. London: Merill Publishers Ltd


Live Virtual Group Session: 12pm EDT August 19th 2020

Thank you to everyone who joined us for this session!

Our text was โ€œLast Writesโ€ by Sandra Becker, posted below.

After two participants read the poem aloud individually, we read it a third time silently as a group. Participants noted how the poemโ€™s metaphorical language, wry tone and confident humor help make a serious subject not only bearable but darkly funny and surprising as an inroad to consider revising oneโ€™s narrative: โ€œThe poet refers to the darkness but excuses it if itโ€™s well written.โ€ One participant associated the poemโ€™s word play and profanity with a comedy club or spoken word performance; someone else saw/heard it as a meditation, a โ€œrailing on limitations of free will.โ€ The group made a meta-level connection between the philosophy of not being a perfectionist with living/writing/singing off-key.

The conversation continued, exploring the work the poem does: bringing light to a dark subject, providing an opportunity to look at โ€œhard stuffโ€ and effect personal change, linking subjectivity with sensitivity. Aligned with the narrative medicine principle of representation, the group paused to explore the end of the poem (โ€œhope via indecision,โ€ โ€œan intellectual exploration with no resolutionโ€), a place where the narrator gives up the idea of perfectionism, and โ€œtakes the pressure off in a beautiful way.โ€

Our reflective writing was to the prompt: โ€œWrite about something off-key.โ€

We had five individuals who shared their reflective writings. There was a broad range of interpretation starting with a take on the dark humor of the text with an imaginative narrative about the organs of a body having a discussion. The next share set an immediate tone of expectation exploring the childโ€™s ideal with a narrative revealing the differences between adult and child perspectives. Another reflection went right to the subject of suicide directly addressing, through poetic description, patient differences both in being and circumstance. This was followed by a reflection about meeting a man diagnosed with schizophrenia. Our participants’ comments observed that through the eyes of this patient we see something new and that if we look closer we may see something we hadnโ€™t seen before. The final shared writing was about a runner struggling to complete a marathon. A man appears off to the side some distance away โ€“ he calls to her by name saying โ€œyou can make it, you can make it.โ€ No one else had seen this young man cheering the racers on. The last line โ€œI believe in the unexpectedโ€ was commented on as a magical ending, which caused a bit of goosebumps; a wholly different take on something off key.

Participants are warmly encouraged to share what you wrote below (โ€œLeave a Replyโ€), to keep the conversation going here, bearing in mind that the blog of course is a public space where confidentiality is not assured.

Also, we would love to learn more about your experience of these sessions, so if youโ€™re able, please take the time to fill out a follow-up survey of one to two quick questions!

Please join us for our next session Monday, August 24th at 6pm EDT, with more times listed on our Live Virtual Group Sessions page.


Last Writes by Sandra Becker

Swallow bleach โ€” too painful,
go up in flames โ€” lifelong fear.
Ah, a gun with a two-hour safety lesson
(I must get it right this time).
Iโ€™m pro-gun for euthanasia.
This really isnโ€™t meant to be morbid.
When discussing poems, films, and books,
Iโ€™ve always told people I donโ€™t care how dark
the subject as long as itโ€™s well-written.
Iโ€™ve not chosen a day or time yet, so this may be my   last poem.
Iโ€™m giving it a shot (unintended pun).
Iโ€™m aiming (shit!) for truth, yes,
but, more importantly, itโ€™s a poem, for Godโ€™s sake, so
veracity to poetic elements is most important.
So far, strong opening with a good hook, an unexpected turn.
Puns ease tension if used sparingly.
Revision essential to get it right.
Tense โ€” present, of course.
Pacing โ€” that of a waterfall bound to its given course.
Stanza breaks โ€” none. One life, all connected, eternal.
Music โ€” well, itโ€™s life, silly โ€” imperfect, canโ€™t have everything.
Unfathomable, unpredictable, impermanent life.
Is that how God wrote it, and, Lord knows,
Iโ€™ve always been quite the perfectionist.
Why not loosen up, break some rules, have a little fun?
Sing off-key, but sing.

Last Writes by Sandra Becker.
The Sun, Last Writes, C. Bursk Copyright ยฉ 2020

Live Virtual Group Session: 6pm EDT August 17th 2020

Thirty people joined our narrative โ€œsanctuaryโ€ โ€” hailing from Canada, England, India, California, Maine, Massachusetts, New Jersey, New Mexico, New York, Pennsylvania, and Washington.ย  A number of brave first-time participants contributed observations and associations alongside those who have been consistently joining these Monday evening discussions.

Our text was โ€œSanctuaryโ€ by Carolyn Forchรฉ, posted below.

Carolyn Forcheโ€™s poem elicited multiple, possible spaces during our reading: dream, film, memory, a Costa Rican cloud forest, Kentucky mountains, and West Virginia. As one particpant said, despite sentences written in past and conditional tenses, the text radiates a sense of timelessness. Another spoke of memory as a refuge or a sanctuary, like the eponymous title, where one is able to return.  Several people commented on the poemโ€™s suggestion of a confluence of the senses beginning with โ€œ[l]ight pealed, bell-likeโ€ in the first line.  

One reader puzzled over the paradoxical notion of the horsesโ€™ freedom and the unfreedom of bridles.  Group participants discovered care in the poem, in the mention of a poultice applied to โ€œsuck the poisonโ€ applied by an unnamed โ€œshe.โ€ They were reminded of being  givers or receivers of care, when treated with a poultice made by oneโ€™s mother and, conversely, applying a poultice to keep a motherโ€™s wounded horse alive while mother was in the hospital.

More than one person found themselves captivated, midway through the poem, by the mention of a mahogany coffin. Two people wondered if the coffin is where the woman who made the poultice kept her herbs.  Someone else wondered if the coffin signifies death and suggests that death can be a sanctuary from suffering.  

Our prompt was a choice between:

Write about a journey you would make again.

OR

Write about a sanctuary.

Ten people shared their four minutes of writing by reading aloud narratives of travel (alone and with others), care, the well-known topography of a loved oneโ€™s face, and the restoring aspects of being in nature.  In listening, we were told of a trip by donkey to the Valley of the Kings and a new friendship formed.  One personโ€™s writing took her to a place that imaginatively combines many places she has traveled in the past.  Another person described a journey without regard to place as the traveler focused on the face of the traveling companion.   Also, In the shadow of the epigram to Forchรฉโ€™s poem:

Ce voyage, je voulais le refaireโ€“โ€“โ€“

This journey, I would like to make againโ€“โ€“โ€“

one narrative alternated between French and English in a rich evocation of places known or imagined. This prompted, for the second time, the idea that one language may not be enough to contain the complexity of deep experience.

Participants are warmly encouraged to share what you wrote below (โ€œLeave a Replyโ€), to keep the conversation going here, bearing in mind that the blog of course is a public space where confidentiality is not assured.

Also, we would love to learn more about your experience of these sessions, so if youโ€™re able, please take the time to fill out a follow-up survey of one to two quick questions!

Please join us for our next session Wednesday, August 19th at 12pm EDT, with more times listed on our Live Virtual Group Sessions page.

Sanctuary
 
                                         Ce voyage, je voulais le refaireโ€“โ€“โ€“
                                         This journey, I would like to make againโ€“โ€“โ€“
 
 
Light pealed, bell-like through the canopy. Long ago or seems so.
Then the ghost of a deer and crows flapping through smoke.
She made a poultice for me of herbs and mud to suck the poison from the boil.
And then she went into a mahogany coffin. As there were then.
Mornings, horses cantered through ground fog having broken loose.
So I would go out for them, bridles in hand, with no one awake.
The closer I came to them, the further they moved away.
Following them through the clouds is a journey I would make again. 
 
 
Forchรฉ, Carolyn. In the Lateness of the World. 2020. New York: Penguin Press.

Encuentros virtuales en vivo: sรกbado 15 agosto, 14:00 EST

Tuvimos otra sesiรณn en espaรฑol y nos fue muy bien. Atendieron 16 participantes en total representando Chile, Estados Unidos, Brasil y Argentina. Tuvimos una buena mezcla de participantes por primera vez y participantes en su 3era o 4ta sesiรณn.

La obra que elegimos para esta sesiรณn se llama โ€œSeis Aforismosโ€, de la filรณsofa espaรฑola Azahara Alonso, publicada a continuaciรณn. Dos voluntarias leyeron este corto texto en voz alta. Rรกpidamente varios participantes manifestaron que no sabรญan lo que es un aforismo, lo cual una vez resuelto provocรณ numerosas observaciones, acerca de la musicalidad de las oraciones que lo componen, por ejemplo, que se veรญa โ€œrotaโ€ por el รบltimo aforismo, con un tono mรกs sombrรญo y que alejaba un tono โ€œrosadoโ€ que se percibรญa. Otro comentario iba dirigido a la sensaciรณn de equilibrio que habรญa dentro de determinados aforismos, y entre los aforismos. Otro participante se preguntรณ si los aforismos debieran ser equilibrados, lo cual fue negado rotundamente por el resto. Sin embargo, surgieron otros comentarios que iban en la lรญnea de los โ€œbinariosโ€,tanto opuestos como interno / externo, jaulas / ventanas, y similares como pasiรณn / isla (aislante). Hubo tambiรฉn consenso en que el sexto aforismo suponรญa una โ€œroturaโ€ respecto al tono de los aforismos previos. Las dos observaciones que mรกs respuestas generaron, sin embargo, fueron acerca del primer aforismo, que un participante interpretรณ como una ecuaciรณn matemรกtica (que incluso resolviรณ!), y otra participante que manifestรณ que no creรญa en los aforismos, puesto que los aforismos son considerados verdaderos, y para ella los aforismos no representan verdades absolutas, y no se pueden aplicar a todos, dado que por ejemplo, en su experiencia puede haber madres con actitudes violentas hacia sus hijos, lo que va en contra del adjetivo โ€œdulceโ€ del cuarto aforismo. Sin embargo, esa afirmaciรณn (โ€œLos aforismos no son verdades en sรญ mismosโ€) podrรญa ser interpretado como un aforismo, lo que generรณ una animada conversaciรณn entre el resto de participantes.

Escribir en conjunto: โ€œEscribe el sรฉptimo aforismoโ€. Varios participantes compartieron sus aforismos, algunos โ€œa la sombra del texto originalโ€, generรกndose un rico intercambio entre los participantes. Un tema recurrente en los escritos de varios participantes fue el concepto de โ€œverdadโ€, y el escrito que mรกs discusiรณn generรณ, hacรญa menciรณn al aforismo que a su vez fue el mรกs nombrado en la conversaciรณn previa, acerca de las caracterรญsticas de una madre y su semejanza (o no) con dios (o Dios?). Hubo consenso en que los aforismos y frases (โ€œdichosโ€) sobre los que se conversรณ ean muy relevantes en relaciรณn al contexto en que estamos viviendo. En general quedรณ la sensaciรณn de que los aforismos aportados por los participantes gustaron al menos lo mismo que los de la autora.

Se alienta a los participantes a compartir lo que escribieron a continuaciรณn (“Deja una respuesta”), para mantener la conversaciรณn aquรญ, teniendo en cuenta que el blog, por supuesto, es un espacio pรบblico donde no se garantiza la confidencialidad.

Por favor, รบnase a nosotros para nuestra prรณxima sesiรณn en espaรฑol: Sรกbado, 29 de agosto a las 2 pm EST, con mรกs oportunidades de sesiones en otros idiomas listadas en nuestra pรกgina de sesiones grupales virtuales en vivo.

ยกEsperamos verte pronto!

ยกCuรฉntenos mรกs sobre su experiencia en este taller completando esta breve encuesta!


SEIS AFORISMOS (Azahara Alonso)

La dicha es un destino. Todo lo fatal es instantรกneo.

* โ€‹ โ€‹

La esperanza es extranjera.

*

En nuestra jaula se pueden abrir las ventanas.

*

Lo mรกs parecido a un dios es la voz de una madre: sobrenatural y dulce.

*

Toda pasiรณn es una isla.

*

Lo malo del estado de bienestar son los vecinos.


Live Virtual Group Session: 12pm EDT August 12th 2020

We opened with 28 participants from New York, California, Dallas, Philadelphia, central
Massachusetts, Montreal, Hamilton, Bahrain, the Philippines, and elsewhere.


The text was Ron Padgettโ€™s poem โ€œHello Central,โ€ and the opening question was โ€œWho
is this poemโ€™s narrator?โ€ Who is telling the story? The first respondent thought this
speaker could be any one of us. Someone else offered that the positioning of the
speaker outside of โ€œcentralโ€ suggested that she or he is part of a marginalized group.
Several people mentioned that they werenโ€™t sure the gender of the speaker, though
some thought the speaker may be female given the pointed reference to โ€œillustrious
menโ€ and the speakerโ€™s position outside of the majority group. Still another person
thought the speaker might be the poet himself. We spoke about the poetโ€™s move from
the general to the particular or, as one responder put it, from the community view to the
individual view, from the communal history to the experience of one individual. Nostalgia
was another theme of our discussion. Participants found that the rather mundane
descriptions of the first stanza took on a warmth and even a romanticism in the
nostalgic recollection of the second stanza. Another noted the direct address in the title
โ€œHello Central,โ€ pointing out that such an address posits a speaker and a listener. The
decentralizing of the school also reflects the decentralizing of the poemโ€™s speaker. But
by the last stanza, the remembered teacher calls for response, thus restoring the
student and speaker of the poem back to the center. Another mentioned that the
student even sits in the โ€œcenterโ€ row. Another question we wrestled with was โ€œWhat
does the phrase โ€˜useful as a brickโ€™ bring up for us?โ€ One reader saw the poemโ€™s very
form (two stacked stanzas) as brick like. Others mentioned the deceptively plain
language of the poem, a blandness that reflects the poetโ€™s view of โ€œCentralโ€ as
colorless and odorless. Another said that by the end of the poem weโ€™ve lost the bricks
and mortar of the school, but thereโ€™s still the brick and mortar of its existence in
memory.


We wrote to the prompt, โ€œWrite a place you returned to.โ€ Our first reader turned this idea
around. Beginning with the idea that โ€œthereโ€™s no going back,โ€ she explored what the
alternatives might be. We noticed that how this response highlighted something
embedded in the promptโ€™s call to think about returning to a place: that the place,
wherever and whatever it is, holds importance to us. Our second reader used poetic
devices like alliteration of s-words to whisper to us about an outdoor space, quite in
contrast to the plain prose about a very plainly named building that was featured in the
prose poem where we started our session. We also remarked that when we return to a
place, we often also return to the age we were when we were there before, as the
poemโ€™s narrator imagines being back in a classroom with Miss Quesenbery. Our fourth
reader used metaphors of traveling in circles to describe her thoughts. And, curiously,
those thoughts were pulled forward by the tracks in the dirt, rather than making the
tracks. Her idea of things she couldnโ€™t help returning to added yet another interpretation
of the prompt. In the dayโ€™s final piece, we heard about a narrator who saw the โ€œsame
lush trees of Juneโ€ but found them distorted because she was not the same and never
could be. We thought about how the passage of time means we can never return to the
same space.

Participants are warmly encouraged to share what you wrote below (โ€œLeave a Replyโ€), to keep the conversation going here, bearing in mind that the blog of course is a public space where confidentiality is not assured.

Also, we would love to learn more about your experience of these sessions, so if youโ€™re able, please take the time to fill out a follow-up survey of one to two quick questions!

Please join us for our next session Monday, August 17th at 6pm EDT, with more times listed on our Live Virtual Group Sessions page.


Hello Central by Ron Padgett

I attended a high school whose name was colorless and odorless: Central
High School. It was called that because it was built in the middle of town,
so that students could converge on it equidistantly. Then the city added
other high schools, all named after illustrious men. The students there
could associate their schools with these figures, but we at Central could
no longer even associate our school with centrality, since by then the
city had expanded and become lopsided. The name Central had become
totally abstract. After sixty years the structure was deemed inadequate,
and a new Central was builtโ€”in the northwest corner of townโ€”discon-
necting the school’s name from its last vestige of meaning.
       In the many times I have returned to my hometown I have never once
driven out to see the new Central. Instead I cruise past the renovated old
structure that now is used as an office building. In my mind’s eye I dash
up the steps and into the hallways crowded with students who only an
hour ago were lost in sleep. I enter room 212 and take my seat at the back
of the center row and feel the day click into place when the bell rings and
Miss Quesenbery looks at her roll book, brushes back an errant strand of
hair, and starts down the alphabet. A rush of anticipation rises in me as
she approaches my name, and when she says it, I answer “Here” in a voice
that makes me feel useful, like a brick.

“Hello Central” by Ron Padgett from Collected Poems. ยฉ Coffee House Press, 2013.


Live Virtual Group Session: 6pm EDT August 10th 2020

Thirty people Zoom-gathered this evening from Argentina, Brazil, Canada, England, India and several states in the USA.

Today, we โ€œclose lookedโ€ at a new kind of text: a mural found in the city of Philadelphia titled “Everything the Light Touches,” designed by Brad Carney with The U School students, and painted with Asociacion Puertorriquenos en Marcha and the 8th and Diamond Rec Center for Mural Arts Philadelphia. After one minute of silent close looking, we shared our impressions and observations. Our first respondent brought attention to the movement in the piece by sharing some of the words that came to her in observing the painting; participants brimmed with observations of what they saw as actions of โ€œreaching, grasping, expandingโ€ in the postures of figures in the mural who they saw โ€œskating, dancing, writingโ€ as they looked for freedom and connection. Some saw women represented and thought of โ€œsisterhoodโ€ and added the idea of โ€œfemale energyโ€ even attempts to โ€œemancipate through writing.โ€

One person said, โ€œPhilly is a city of muralsโ€ and followed with a โ€œseeing Ben Franklin.โ€ Freedom was again mentioned, which seems fitting with what we know about the cityโ€™s early history, congresses, and the Liberty Bell. The second time it was mentioned as โ€œFreedom into flyingโ€ and pointing to a figure that looked as if about to leave the ground.

More than one participant saw music–music floating, music โ€œadding colorโ€, music reaching different corners.  The muralโ€™s narrative brought associations to Yeatsโ€™ โ€œnegative capability,โ€ which suggests the value of living with uncertainty. (A value held by NM close-reading and slow-looking in which we explore together without illusions of โ€œsolvingโ€ or certainty in deciphering texts.)

Attention was paid to the bright colors, the โ€œopacityโ€ of the blue, red, pink, and green; the combination of realism, impressionism, and abstraction, and how these aspects โ€œenliven architecture.โ€ As one participant contributed: โ€œThere is more to an inner city than bricks and cement.โ€ That comment took us back to an earlier visual text and our discussion of that which is โ€œswirling in the air.โ€ Another said the lines in the muralโ€™s design made her think of the technique of drawing without lifting the lead from the paper, which provides continuity to the rendering.

Before prompting 4-minutes of writing, when we asked participants to โ€œchatโ€ possible titles for the (as yet unrevealed) title for this community mural, people suggested;

Freedom

Blowing Circlesโ€”Walls of Jericho

Color Me Here

Chromatic Scripts

Flights of Fancy

Seize Your Joy

Philadelphia Notes

Unconditional Colorful Release

Urban Ballet

Urban Jazz

Urban Jam

When asked to โ€œPortray a person, place, or thing that you wish the light touchedโ€ those who read their work aloud shared odes to people (family or friends) whose lives seemed limited due to aging or other situations that writers wished light (internal or external) could shine on them. There were comments about limiting our own assumptions about who or when to shine a light on another. As we shared our thoughts, we reflected on the need to be attentive and mindful as we shine light on others – what kind of light would they prefer? whose stories are we taking up and colonizing? Participants were grateful for the new perspective this piece and each otherโ€™s writings contributed, flipping โ€œour expectations of light being a good thingโ€. It also revealed how assumptions may shape what we see and hear, or what we look for.

These comments fit well with another personโ€™s writing about turning over rocks in nature and uncovering life that preferred the dark. The writer gave voice to the lives of these โ€œroly-poliesโ€ who asked the narrator to cover them up again and leave them in the dark.    

We closed off by asking ourselves questions about the nature and the origin of light:  โ€œDoes lightness have to come from the outside?โ€ โ€œOr can it come from the inside?โ€ โ€œOr does it matter as long as we get to experience it?โ€

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Please join us for our next session Wednesday, August 12th at 12pm EDT, with more times listed on our Live Virtual Group Sessions page.


โ€œEverything the Light Touchesโ€
Designed by Brad Carney with The U School students and painted with Asociacion Puertorriquenos en Marcha and the 8th and Diamond Rec Center. For Mural Arts Philadelphia.